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PostSubject: Race to Insanity   Sun May 31, 2009 5:46 pm

Chapter 1 -- Fate at Hand

Ixion: "Stop Blabbering. Raise, Call, or Fold"
Rayquaza: "Oh quiet Ixion. I call. A pair of Aces"
Ixion: "A full house"
Rayquaza: "Ah crap.."
Ixion greedily took the chips from the center of the table
Soccerryle: "I'm Dealing!"
Chrono: "He's gonna rig the deck.."
Soccerryle: "NO IM NOT!"
Soccerryle slips 2 Aces from his sleeve
Chris Glares

Soccerryle: "I was just joking!"
Chris: "Mmmmmhm.."
Soccerryle: "Fine! Ixion, you deal."
Chrono: "Now you know he's gonna rig it.."
Soccerryle: "Ray! Just shuffle and deal already."
Rayquaza: "Haha, I'm the honest one!"
Ixion: "I think otherwise.."
Rayquaza: "Anyway.. Here, I'll make this a nice wager. The winner of this hand get 2 free tickets in Poketopia."
Soccerryle: "Isn't that the new theme park in Metropolis?"
Rayquaza: "Yes it is, so you may need to choose wisely with your cards. I'll start. $5."
Ixion: "I'll raise you $3."
Chris: "I'll raise $2."
Soccerryle: "Raise $3."
Chrono: "Fold"
Chrono bends cards.
Chris: "Chrono, why are you bending the cards.."
Chrono: "I said I fold, so I'm folding!"
Chris shakes head.
Chris: He'll never learn..
Rayquaza: "Raise $3!"
Ixion: "Call."
Chris: "Rays raising alot.. I fold."
Soccerryle: "Call."
Rayquaza shows his hand (Three 9s)
Ixion shows his hand (Three 7s)
Soccerryle shows his hand (Three 8s)

Rayquaza: "Aww.. I didn't want to win the tickets.."
Chrono: "We should win em' differently. Like in a race or somethin."
Chris: "Racing! Now that's somthing I could win!"
Rayquaza: "Let's do it!"
Ixion: "Rules......?"
Rayquaza: "Hmm.. We race through.. hmm.. 16 tracks? And get points? Like 1st place 5 points, Last 1 point, and so on?"
Chris: "Sounds too easy!"
Chrono: "Stop bragging Chris."
Soccerryle: "So when do we..."
Motorcycle Engine Starts Up.
Soccerryle: "Who's that.."
Chrono: "It's Ixion!"
Chris: "Haha, looks like he got a headstart!"
Rayquaza: "Lets set the 1st track in a different direction then. Opposite of where he's going."
Chris: "So.. to get to Metropolis.. 1st would be..."
Soccerryle: "Raymania Square."
Rayquaza: "Let's start at dawn. Give Ixion his 'headstart'"
They all go in their house in the Village
Chrono stays behind and replaces their Motor Oil with Diet Cola.

Chris: "CHRONO..."
Chrono: "Coming!"
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Sun May 31, 2009 6:11 pm

OMFG! I love that I was laughing so hard my father thought I was crazy. (He's the second last person on earth to not think I'm 'WHHHEEE'...) But really, great job, Justin! I can't wait to read more of it!!!!! (:

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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Sun May 31, 2009 8:28 pm

a story without me? unrealistic! sucks without the Monkey!

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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Sun May 31, 2009 10:04 pm

Are you ever going to add other people to your story? If you don't, it seems like you favor more people than others...just saying..I love the part where Chrono folds the cards.
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Sun May 31, 2009 10:32 pm

Haha! Fun story so far! I laughed where Chrono 'folds' the cards too! Keep the story coming!

@ Monkey - You got your marriage in Raymania. I think thats enough for one day! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Mon Jun 01, 2009 9:29 am

Chrono: "Fold"
Chrono bends cards.
Chris: "Chrono, why are you bending the cards.."
Chrono: "I said I fold, so I'm folding!"

honnestly i have done that befor honest......*me goes into a flash back to the first time i played poker* I was sitting on the sofa in the common room right, and i was talking to someone and i hear my friends playing poker so i heard them saying "gawd i have to fold this hand sux" so i leave the fool iam talking to, to go see what they are doing. they said i can play and showed my frined next to me my hand and he said "right fold your hand is really bad" so i get the cards and i fold them......i had to by another pack of cards...its scary how soccerryle knows this........
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Mon Jun 01, 2009 11:01 am

Chrono and the cards! lol! Maybe Soccer is secretly a clairvoyant, and that's how he knows you bent the cards, Chrono. Though if Soccer's clairvoyant, that'd be...creepy. o.O

Very good start, nice and funny...makes me wonder how zany it's gonna end up. Keep it coming, Soccer!
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:44 pm

Chapter 2: Plaza of Doom (Pronounced: Plaza of DDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMM)

The sun rises overhead.
Rayquaza: All Ready?
Chris: Yep!
Chrono: Yuhhuh.
Soccerryle slowly walks up the hill, yawning.
Chrono: C'mon you old man!
Soccerryle: Hahaha.. -_-
Rayquaza: So, are we ready to race through the plaza??
Chris: Mmmhm!
Rayquaza: Go from here to the drawbridge. At the end of the drawbridge, thats where we end.
Chrono: Where's Ixion??
Chris: God knows where..
Rayquaza: Ready...
Kassandra walks up Holding a Flag.
Kassandra:
On you Marks..
Ready..
Set..
GO!!
Chrono runs over Kassandra in his convertible.

AND THE RACE BEGINS!!

Cars:
Chrono: Convertible
Soccerryle: Jaguar
Rayquaza: Ford Mustang
Chris:BMW X5

--Race Begins-
All 4 go down the street.
Circle the Water Fountain in the center.
Wave to the spectators.
Chris overtakes Chrono is his larger vehicle.
1) Rayquaza - 2) Soccerryle - 3) Chris - 4) Chrono
Chris overtakes Soccerryle.
Rayquaza hits Chris.
Chris's backleft hubcap comes off.
Soccerryle realizes what Rayquaza did.
Soccerryle hits Chris on the opposite side.
Chris's backright hubcap comes off.
Chris's vehicle does a 720 Degree frontflip and catches on Fire (Jk)
Chris's vehicle ACTUALLY slows down and leaves skid marks in the plaza's stone road.
Chris looses control and runs into the side of Sasuke's electric gym and shatters Lanturn's fishtank.
Lanturn curses Chris out: "#$&@ YOU, ^&^%^*()_(*&^%!!!
Sasuke draw drops when Lanturn realizes Sasuke is watching.
Lanturn smiles at Sasuke innocently.
Chris uses his robo-arm to replace the hubcaps.
While these 3 were fighting, Chrono overtook the crowd.
1) Chrono - 2) Rayquaza - 3) Soccerryle - 4) Chris
Chris slowly overtook Soccerryle.
Chris overtakes Rayquaza.
Chrono speeds up.
Soccerryle speeds up.
1) Chrono - 2) Chris - 3) Soccerryle - 4) Rayquaza
The drawbridge nears ahead.
A boat comes by, and the drawbridge begins to raise.
All 4 speed up.
Chrono and Chris jump the bridge (Which is at a 60 Dedgree Angle)
Chrono hits Chris.
As Chris lands, his car spins and he crashes into a Bush.
Chrono wins!!!!


--Race Ending--

Standings:
1st Place - Chrono - 5 Pts.
2nd Place - Soccerryle - 4 Pts.
3rd Place - Rayquaza - 3 Pts.
4th Place - Chris - 2 Pts.

Chris: Gang up on me why dontcha!!
Chrono: Will do!
Soccerryle: Congrats Chrono.
Rayquaza: Yea, Congratulations!
Chrono: I'm owning you three..
Chris: Not for long!
Rayquaza: Next is.. Elder Mountain! We'll start tomorrow at Dawn.
Chris: I'm not letting you win next time chrono!
Chrono: You didn't 'let' me win the 1st time.. -_-
Chris: Yes I did!
Soccerryle tells Rayquaza: "He's in denial".
Chris: I HEARD THAT!
Soccerryle: You were supposed to!

And they all walk off, ready for the next race..
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:50 pm

I WON I WON

i just want to that my parent, my mum and my dad for supporting my when no one else belived i could do it. i just want to thank my manager simon cowell who is a little greek according to stfots flatly............any who.... I WON.........elder mountain iam going to win again WHOOO no im not iam going to lose to ray...
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:59 pm

Lol! So funny! keep the story coming! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:10 pm

Chris: Gang up on me why dontcha!!
Chrono: Will do!

acctually here i would say dontcha wish you were a winner like me, dontcha.

yea iam a sore winner sometimes...
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:17 pm

Chrono, wait until you lose a race! Razz Are you just a sore winner or a sore loser too? XD jk! Smile

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Chrono runs over Kassandra in his convertible.
Lol! sounds like something Chrono would do! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:34 pm

Really, really? I compliment you then you let me get run over by the king of jerks, AKA Chrono.. <.< (jk)

This is good though, whatever happened to ixion? Did his head start kick him out? lol

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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Mon Jun 01, 2009 5:18 pm

That's mean...Keep ixion in the story..and poor Kass...Let me write a story about you getting run over by a blue whale Justin. >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Tue Jun 02, 2009 5:58 am

wow..nice story..o.o..especially since I NEVER check the story section (dont bother for it much..)
I was a bystander watching tht race...while drawing as always lol
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Tue Jun 02, 2009 12:48 pm

pn wrote:
That's mean...Keep ixion in the story..and poor Kass...Let me write a story about you getting run over by a blue whale Justin. >.>

Okay.. Err.. Run me over.. Rolling Eyes. And Ixions not gone!! Just wait!! =)
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Tue Jun 02, 2009 1:16 pm

iam waiting iam waiting but iam bored of waiting
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PostSubject: Re: Race to Insanity   Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:57 pm

Chrono, go win a race while you wait

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