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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:22 pm

Wow! Nice start to season 2! This season is set to be interesting! Wonder what will happen next...
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:25 pm

Good chapter, leaving me on suspense...WRITE ANOTHER I HATE SUSPENSE!! lol
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:27 pm

Oh no run merc.
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:41 pm

ahhh golf, the #2 awnser to all of lifes problems, right after beer(yet beer is also the #1 cause of the problems, so i guess golf will fit into the story better, but i could drink while golfing...wow, this is a long sub-note)
good story, hope i bet Ray >.>

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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Jun 18, 2009 3:22 pm

Quote :
Monkey: Sooner or later the parent will think your a pedo
Rialys: Hu? Did you say something sterile?

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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Jun 18, 2009 3:26 pm

Oh no, MERC! NOOO!! DON'T LET SOCCER GET YOU!!! Stupid police chef (that's what you called him, Chrono) not letting pn be safe!

And lol, -4 in History. Tut tut, Boy. ^_^;
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Jun 18, 2009 4:52 pm

RUN mERC. Justin is going to attack me.
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:28 pm

pn is going to die :O
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:30 pm

That's nice of you xD
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Jun 18, 2009 7:20 pm

pn wrote:
That's nice of you xD

Ixion's such an optimist.. Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:44 am

Danger! Danger is everywhere; if you playing in the playground at school, doing the ironing, or diving down the road.....

3 years earlier

Noland*

Soccerryle: Thanks you dear that was a great lunch, did you like that mercury?
Mercury: Yea it was great
Pn: Well thank you. And thats not all for what me and your father have for the remainder of your Birthday.
Mercury: What else is there?
Pn: Well its a suprize and we have to drive to it
Soccerryle: But thats latter, for now i have some sleeping to do, and i suggest you do the same you dont want to be tired tonight.
Mercury;But iam not tired.
Pn: Well you can get tired tonight then, and miss out.
Mercury: Fine.

couple hours later night time around 7-8*

Soccerryle: Everyone ready to go?
Mercury: I am more than ready.
Pn: I think that proves were ready, soccerryle.

They get into the car Pn is driving*

Soccerryle: Mercury your going to have a great time tonight.
Mercury: I cant wait are we there yet?
Soccerryle: Not far now.
Pn: This is lovely for what your doing.
Soccerryle: Only for the people I love, LOOK OUT!

The Noland car tries to break as it comes down a hill, but its to late and it hits a car driving from the left and is hit on the side. The other car flips, and Noland car spines out of control*

Soccerryle: Is everyone all right?
Mercury: My arm is hurting. *tearing*
Pn: Oh my god, oh my god, soccerryle go check the other car i will call the police.
soccerryle exits out of the car and finds in the other car a mother and a little girl both got hit and dead because they were on the side of the impact*

Few minutes later police and ambulance arrive*

Doctor: Are you three alright?
Mercury: My arm is hurting alot *crying*
Doctor well come in the ambulance so i can see if its allright, if that ok with you?
Pn: please do.
Police: Befor you tend to your child may i ask a few questions?
Soccerryle: Not at all.
Police: Were you speeding?
Pn: No
Police: You do know on a hill, and expecially a steep hill like his you should go less than 30MPH because the hill will speed you up?
Pn: No
Police: Do you know the people who died?
Pn: No
Police: Thanks for your time.

couple hours later mercury with a broken arm at the hospital for the night. back at home*

Pn: I cant belive i killed them
Soccerryle: you didnt kill them.
Pn: I did, i drove i crashed into them they died.
Soccerryle: It was a freak accident.
Pn: Dont you care? Dont you? I took two peoples life.
Soccerryle: Your tired you should go to bed.
Pn: how could i sleep.
Soccerryle: Take a pill, i dont know.
Pn: Fine i willl

Next morining*

Soccerryle: Feeling better?
Pn: How can I when i killed someone.
Soccerryle: Oh look kass brought mercury back.
Pn: What times is it then?
Soccerryle: Twelve.

Door Bell*

Soccerryle: Kass, thanks for bringing Mercury. How are you feeling?
Kass: Not a problem.
Mercury: Fine

Mercury walks in the room*

Kass: Well iam sorry i cant stay i have to take boy to his play rehersal.
Soccerryle: Thanks for everything

Kass leaves *

Pn: How you feeling Mercury? not like the people I killed would know.
mercury: ok....
Soccerryle: WOULD YOU STOP.
Pn: WHY WOULD I STOP I KILLED A MOTHER AND HER CHILD
Soccerryle: IT WASNT YOUR FAULT.
Pn: WHO WAS DRIVING?.....

couple hours of arguing later*

Soccerryle: I CANT TAKE IT ANY MORE.
Pn: THEN LEAVE.
Soccerryle: Fine I will. (whispering to mercury) i will come back to get you, i dont know how but i will, with any means nessessry.

Soccerryle exits*


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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:56 am

That was epic
Lots of annoying gaps filled in =D
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:30 am

that police officer isnt very good at his job
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sun Jun 21, 2009 11:21 am

Nice chapter! It does explain a lot about PN and Soccerryles situation... I still wonder what's going to happen next...

I agree with ixion - the police officers in this story aren't very good at their jobs at all! Lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sun Jun 21, 2009 3:35 pm

sorry this episode is shown late... should have been on earlier.

Fathers day. Fathers day is when wives and children treat there husbands or father to a nice treat. Fathers day is when the fathers can take a day off and relax. At Raysteria lain Fathers day is usually celebrated with breakfast in bed made by the family, the father watching tv and not doing household chores and no work. Then a resident at Raysteria lain will throw a party for all the happy couples, while the children spend time with there baby sitter. Max Sorrow is this years resident who is throwing the party.

Sorrow*

Everyone is talking in small groupes*

Group 1*

Kass: Oh thats a great idea Chris.
Chris: Oh and Kassandra, i spoke to that reilter of yours oh whats his name...
Kass: Luigi
Chris: Thats the one. He told me number 46 was free.
Ray: Iam sorry you cant move into number 46
Chris: May i ask why not?
Ray: Well you see, thats Chrono's house.
Chris: Chrono?
Kass: Chrono was a really nice person, he was kind to everyone, he never hated, then out of the blue he shot himself.
Chris: Why would someone do that?
Kass: I dont know but, No one new untill Mrs Marks, went to his house to ask his advice, she says the door was open and he was lieing there with a gun in his hand.
Chris: Thats terrible, but when i move in i will be sure to remove all the demons that lie in the house.
Ray: You dont get it, you cant move it, please iam sure luigi can find you another house.
Chris:I am sorry.......

When group 1 started this was going on at group 2*

Pn: So how was paris
Max: Honestly Pn, it was boring without your charm.
Pn: Oh shut up.
Max:No honestly, all i did was show off my summer mens clothes designs.
Pn: Well you must have met some nice French boys
Max: I did but...they werent my type.....
Pn: NO WAY. you found a girl, i know that look max, you get that look when you found someone you really like, who is she?
Max: I dont kiss and tell.
Pn: Oh so there is someone, who is she?
Max: Her name is Adriana Lima, I met her when i was shooting, she said she likes male photographers.
Pn: So i gess you guys feel in love, right?
Max: Yea, She would have came here, but she couldn't get the visa.
Pn: But you to love each other, right?
Max: Yea. I was seeing marrage.
Pn: This early you should take it slow with whats her name again?
Max: Adriana Lima

overhearing*

Rialys: Did someone say Adriana Lima?
Pn: Yea max did.
Rialy: She is a backstabbing thief. If you know whats good for ya stay away, far away.
Max: Shut up rialys, you dont even know her.
Rialys; Know her i worked with her, and she took everything away from me, she took my money,my boyfriend, my inployer.
Max:Shut up Rialys, your just annoyed that your husband is sterile and you wont have a baby.
Monkey: Max uncalled for.
Max: Iam happy why can you just let me be?
Chris: You should to what makes you feel best.
Ray: Do you think the party is over?
Kass: Shut up ray its getting good.
Pn:Max are you ok?
Max: Everyone get out now.
Ray: Told you.
Max: I SAID GET OUT!

while groupe 1 and group 2 were talking thi was happining in group 3*

Monkey: Its good to see max back.
Gab: Yea it is.
Rialys: How have you been, Gab?
Gab: Good, good, Lucy would have come but she didnt feel up to it, being pregnant and all, iam sure you know the feeling Rialys, i wouldnt really know.
Rialys: Oh yea the pregnant feeling, yea its a real killer, iam suuuure (nugges monkey)
Monkey: Yep Rialys can kill when shes pregnant.
Gab: Oh so you guys did have a baby.
Monkey: Yep
Gab: Well next time i come down to see my little sister Rialys I should bring my son along.
Rialys: No, JR is sick.
Gab: JR? you named your son Monkey Spencer Junior?
Rialys: Yes thats a perfect name. Hows mom, i know she lives about a couple hours away, hey thats why your hear for the party only(Rialys is really nervous and is looking for a topic change)
Gab: Yea i better leave soon to get back to Mom's unless i can stay the night?
Max:Adriana Lima
Rialys: Did someone say Adriana Lima?

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Guys i hope you are likeing season 2 i need more responses and more discusion.
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sun Jun 21, 2009 3:43 pm

Great story. Adraina Lima. Interesting name.
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sun Jun 21, 2009 3:59 pm

Hahahha! I told Ray to shut up... XD

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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:22 pm

yea...JR...he's ummm...err...doing well...other than being sick...
seriously i like it, this lie will make the story fun =)

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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:39 pm

good story im a real estate agent wow this gets better and better
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Mon Jun 22, 2009 12:56 pm

Interesting Chappie. Max went mad all of a sudden o.O I wonder what's happened to all the children... scratch
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Mon Jun 22, 2009 1:11 pm

Good chapter. I wonder why Max suddenly blew! Shocked

Wonder what will happen next!
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Mon Jun 22, 2009 3:05 pm

er...lol, but why am I so obsessed with this Adriana Lima? Kinda worrying...
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:20 pm

i work for the real estate
yeah
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:43 am

You already said that luigi o.O
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:46 am

i know
but its awesome XD
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