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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:55 pm

adriana got married, so sad
but shes still a great model
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sun Jul 05, 2009 12:15 pm

Chrono, how's the next chapter coming along?? I'm curious as to what happens next! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:56 pm

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Chrono, how's the next chapter coming along?? I'm curious as to what happens next! XD
mee too oh BTW i dont know what the next guide was supposed to beee? Mad
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Mon Jul 13, 2009 10:24 am

Diseption, its human nature to decive, everyone is cheated on by someone in there life, if its your friend who says they cant go to see a movie, and goes see a movie with other friends.

Rialys Spencer is no exception, she was a desperate fool looking for a baby.

Rialys and Kass at the mall

Rialys: Maybe I can steal a baby.
kass: Why dont you just adopt.
Rialys: I would but adopted children always have problems.
Kass: you sure?
Rialys: Possitive, I like the stealing idea.
Kass: yea if you want to go to jail for stealing and pedophilia.
Rialys: Uncalled for.
Kass: Sorry its just Ray and Chris are putting my under so much pressure.
Rialys: Why whats happening?
Kass: Ray wants to do everything cheaply but Chris wants to spare no expene and ern everything back, i dont know who to go for.
Rialys: Which ever gets you the most money, love comes second, money first remember that.
Kass: So chris?
Rialys: Iam not saying anything.
Kass: So do you really know who Adriana Lima is?
Rialys; Dont know and dont care.
Kass; So you lied to Max?
Rialys: i was desperate.
Kass: Howcome?
Rialys: Gab was asking about children, and it kinda came onto the subject that me and monkey had a child...
Kass: Haha
Rialys: This is not a laughing matter now he keeps asking for a play date for his eldest son who is around your son's age so maybe.....
Kass: No.
Rialys: You dont even know what i was going to ask.
Kass: You were going to ask if you could borrow Boy and pretend hes your son.
Rialys: hmmm no ha, what gave you that idea, i was going to ask if we could borrow sasuke....
Kass; No, so when ever your family has a get together my son has to come with you.
Rialys: Just this once...
Kass; No just tell him the truth.
Rialys: The truth brings pain and suffering to my sole.....PLEASE (some people in the shop turn to look) Iam begging you please......
Kass: Get up Rialys your embarricing me..
Rialys: All i wanted is a baby...hey i got an idea...cya later Kass....kissess.
Kass: *Confused voice* bye?

Spencer*

Rialys is on the phone....

Rialys: Yes so you can come down from mexico in two days?
Voice: Yes.
Rialys: Cya then and remember your brother cant know....
Monkey enters
Monkey: Hey babes who was that.
Rialys: Oh just PN telling about how annoyed she is about this police man..
Monkey: Sounds like a problem.
Rialys: well you know pn.

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sorry its a little short didn't have time to finish hope to continue soon....also enjoy my other story "Darkbrotherhood" where strange events happen......
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Mon Jul 13, 2009 10:41 am

=O
Stealing a baby? o.O
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Mon Jul 13, 2009 10:51 am

Wonder who's the voice.. :O
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Mon Jul 13, 2009 12:11 pm

-.- So now I'm gonna steal Merc? Geez! Well, if Mexico=Soccer, then...meh, I've become one of the bad guys! Surprised
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Mon Jul 13, 2009 12:42 pm

Goddarnit.
Didn't think of that -.-
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sat Jul 18, 2009 2:33 pm

Chrono, sorry about the delay in posting this but I just read it! XD

Awesome chapter! Bring on the next one! I wonder what'll happen next...
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sat Jul 18, 2009 10:29 pm

Ehe. Rialys is my Partner In Crime XD.

I have an assumption. Rialys was the person who I went to after pn stabbed me? I'm the one on the phone??

Anyway, we'll find out soon =D
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:23 am

*continued*

noldand*

Kass and Pn are sitting at the table in Pns house.

Kass: God tht Rialys sure has issues with children.
Pn: What do you mean?
Kass: She told me she wanted to steal someones child.
Pn: You sure? You sure she didnt want to steal your child.
Kass: Acctually she wanted your child.
Pn: So yours?
Kass: What?
Pn: Never mind.
Kass: Anyways so did you hear any new from Soccerryle? and what does he look like now?
Pn: nothing and fat.
Kass: Serously. all mexicans are thin as sticks.
Pn: well i dont know i didnt really look, since i was being killed.
Kass: Being killed? But your still here, arent you?
Pn: Yes iam still here, now dont be so silly.

2 days later, in a dark street rialys and a shadowy figure are talking*

Riayls: Its about time you got here.
Shadowy figure: It was a long flight.
Rialys: So heres the adress i will try to keep them away.
Shadowy figure; What ever you say, what time should we meet then?
Rialys: I will call you to tell you i got all of them away so we can work quietly.
Shadowy Figure: And your sure they wont mind.
Rialys: As long as we stick to the plan i can get a child. Now i will be taking my leave, this street is giving me the creeps, also go around the back so the neigbours can see you.
Shadowy figure: will do good bye.
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:38 am

nice chapter 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:53 am

Skywarp wrote:

Kass: Anyways so did you hear any new from Soccerryle? and what does he look like now?
Pn: nothing and fat.
Kass: Serously. all mexicans are thin as sticks.

Pwnt.

Not as good as some of your others, but it was a good chapter.
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:24 am

oh dude i didn;t know what to say,,i am sorry for the affence...
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:34 pm

Oh boy, I'm really the main antagonist here aren't I? lol, it's funny to see me being interpreted as some evil child-stealing alien...
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Aug 06, 2009 1:21 pm

Haha! Rialys is now one of the bad guys... I wonder if/when she will actually steal a child...

Chrono, a bit shorter than other chapters but it was still good. Though, I do prefer previous chapters to your latest one. Still, keep the story going and be sure to update soon so that we all find out what happens next!
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:50 pm

well its not another chapter its a continueation from the chapter befor it hence the continue. since i didnt have time to finish the other chapter i did it now.
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:18 am

Trust, trust is important in any relationship, without trust a relationship can crash and burn.....

Spencer*

Rialys: Monkey you should go see a movie tonight maybe take hmmm kass and Pn?
Monkey:You kicking me out?
Rialys: Hmmm hahahaha (over dramatic fake laughing) heavens no, why would i do that. You should go out with the boys if you want and take Kass and Pn
Monkey: Why does Kass and Pn have to come?
Rialys: Because, they need a break.
Monkey: And you not coming because?
Rialys: Because...Iam...
Monkey:Your?
Rialys: Because iam going through my lady time ok, and i dont want anyone to bother me.
Monkey: Geese calm down. fine i will take everyone away.
Rialys: Thank you.

Bines*

Ray: Wow, were not putting in a disco ball,
Kass: Why are you like that Chris says white you say black, why?
Ray: Because its our restaurant and I thought it would be diffrent.
Chris: Well, if we dont have a disco ball the down stairs will not be do "groovy ".
Kass: Groovy?
Chris: Yes that is what the kids are saying right, iam trying to stay diggy with it dog.
Ray: Still like this guy?
Kass: Hes funny,
Ray: Fine i give up, you guys can design it and i will go, do some guy stuff, you down wit that?
Kass: Wow i swear it turned all 70s all up in here.
Chris: Well you do that, yet least me and kass can get down to some real buisness.
Ray: Fine
chris: Fine.
(telephone rings)
Kass: Ill be right back. (answers the phone) Yellow....
Rialys: Hey, babes,
Kass: Oh hi Rialys how are you?
Rialys: Iam good, iam good, are you free tonight?
Kass: Hold on....Ray are we free tonight?
Ray: I belive so.
Kass: Yea i am.
Rialys: Good, ok so you wnt to go out tonight.
Kss: Ray you want to go out tonight?
Ray: Sure...No why put the baby chairs there the old people could trip an die.
Kass: Yea sure.
Rialys: Ok cool, Monkey will pick ya up laters, cya babes.
Kass: Bye.

Noland*

Pn: Mercury, would you get off that computer for a second?
Mercury: NO! i nearly got a high score.
Pn: Now, its Lunch time so come and eat.
Mercury; Fine.
(phone rings)
PN answers: Hello?
Rialys: Hey P, how are ya?
Pn: Iam good, you?
Rialys: Iam good, iam good, so you want to go out tonight?
PN: Sure, i wll have to find a babysitter now tho.
Rialys: Babysitter, i think mercurys old enough.
Pn: You think so, but you know with Soccerryle buisness i wont take my chances.
Rialys: Fine, Monkey will pick you up later.

Later*

Monkey drives away from Rialys and picks up Ray,Kass, Chriss, Pn, Max and another girl named Jenny.


Max: So monkey. wheres Rialys.
Monkey: Shes ummm going through, her "Lady time"
The hole car starts talking saying: "oh dam", "That nasty","Monkey why", ect.

Rialys*

ShadowyFigure: Your late.
Rialys: Iam sorry Monkey didn't want to go.
ShadowyFigure: How is monkey havent seen him for years.
Rialys: hes good but htats not the point, now stick to te plan and the child it mine.

They walk to a house and stand at the backdoor*

Rialys: You ready?
ShadowyFigure: I was born ready.
Rialys: Remember were in and were out, got that?
ShadowyFigure; Yes, yes lets go.

Rialys opens the door nd they both steep in and Rialys closes it very slowly so the neighbours dont see or hear*
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Wed Aug 12, 2009 9:34 am

nice 1 i liked it 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Wed Aug 12, 2009 11:56 am

I just saw Merc say 'NO! I nearly got a high score' and cracked up. So appropriate.

And dang, I really am a bad guy...and I call people 'babes'?! o.O
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:01 pm

ROFLCOPTER

^_____^

Epic Chapter.
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Wed Aug 12, 2009 1:55 pm

Chrono, cool chapter! I wonder what will happen next... Question Can't wait to see the next chapter uploaded! Make sure its soon chrono!

Rialys, yes, you are one of the bad guys! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sun Oct 18, 2009 9:44 am

sorry for the late epicness.

Spencer:

Rails: Ok you go upstairs, while i search for something down stairs.
Shadowy Figure: Sure thing.
Rails: Remember to keep quiet I don't want the next door to hear us.
Shadowy Figure: Fine fine fine.

*Shadowy figure goes upstairs whle Rails looks for something.

Car*

Max: So Monkey where exactly are we going.
Kass: Oh my god i dont like dark chocolate Pn, you freak.
Monkey: Were going to watch a film and go to eat something.
Pn: Sounds good, and kass give it a try.
Ray: She doesn't have to try it if she doesn't want to.
Pn: Shut it you, i want her to try it she never had it in her life.
Max: Shes doing well. she maybe comming here soon. if she gets her visa that is.
Kass: for work? so what Pn people say it makes them feel sick to have.
Ray: you know what ill try a piece and tell you if i like it.
Monkey: Wait what film are we going to watch..?
Pn: Watch "tomorrow after yesterday" heard that really good.
Kass: No..we should watch Jedi's newest film "Natzi zombie killer2".
Ray: The first one was really good.
Monkey: I think sequels ruin the move tho.
Max: How about Megan fox's new film "Adapters 2" i head its better than the first.
Monkey: Even so.
Ray: O MY GOD MEGAN FOX IS FIT AS.....
*Kass hits ray on the head*
Ray: Fit as a female dog.
*Kass knods her head*
*monkey parks the car they all get out and get tickets*

*spencer*

Rialys: so you ready?
Shadowy figure: Hell yea.

*the following clip was removed for younger viewers*

Rialys: I hope this worked, and oh my you were good.
Shadowy figure: Thanks i know iam talented.
Rialys: gees no wounder Pn loved you..


thats it so far...stay tuned for next season on DESPERATE RAY WIVES
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:18 pm

....Waitwaitwait...Desperate Ray Wives lives again?!

Oh dear...I now have a bad feeling as to what I was up to with the shadowy figure...
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PostSubject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives   Sun Oct 18, 2009 5:21 pm

RIALYS! Thanks for that item y'kno ;D

Anyways, woohoo, DRW Ftw, Very Happy
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