Ok this is the prologue of the story tell me what you think.
Long long ago, before the Region of Raymania, before pokemon, there was the was Raytonia. Raytonia was led by the Empiral Leader called Alpine. Alpine was not very religious and the church believed God would punish them for not having a leader who believes in God.
Panda head of the churched rallied and made believers scared and angry, and they started to rebel against Alpine. Alpine wasn't worried about this tiny rebellion, and didn't take any care of Panda's preaching. But a few months later Panda's followers grew to a massive 10 000, and he started to burn villages, and kill people, all for the glory of God.
Alpine, was still not worried and sent a message out, to main families in Raytonia. That each family will need to send some of there army to help aid the imperial army.
They met at "No,mans land dessert", the Imperial alliance was out numbered 10 000 to 4 000. Alpine was still not worried because the 10 000 men were untrained, while is 4 000 were trained and skilled. His closest friend, Ray, made a plan to insure that victory will be theres, since only 3 families came, Boyo who was the nephew of BoBo who owned the land of Libre,
Mercury and nicole were sent by chrono. And Ray came with his son ixion.
Ray's plan, was that Boyo will goo with Ray and Ixion, and head east and cut off there supplies, Mercury, and Nicole will go west and cut of reinforcements ad the imperial Army will go straight and kill them all, and they will surround them all kill them all.
Alpine, like this plan so they did it, and Panda and his army were quelled. and the rebels who did run away were never seen again.
there is dialect but its a prologue so hope this seems like a good story there is more drama, romance ,and of course the chrono comedy.