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PostSubject: reshirams love interest!   Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:02 pm

in the pokemon world love is in the air! for reshi that is! with who you might ask? WELL READ AND FIND OUT!


keldeo:ummm reshi why you drooling?

reshiram:i wasent drooling

keldeo:wait a second.....YOUVE GOT A CRUSH ON SOMEONE!

reshiram:no i dont! why would I!? im genderless anyways!

keldeo:sure you are reshi sure you are.....

blaziken:whats the problom?

keldeo:reshi's got a crush

reshiram:no i dont!

blaziken:O_o ummm ima just walk away now real slow like *walks away*

keldeo:akward...so who do you have a crush on?

reshiram:I DONT HAVE A CRUSH ON ANYONE!!!

keldeo:sure you dont..... *walks away*

reshiram:gezz i was just drooling and now he thinks i have a crush on someone! Mad

latias:hi reshi!

reshiram:oh! umm hi latias!...how are you doing today?

latias:i was on my way back from the market

reshiram:oh i see......well you look nice today

latias:thanks giggle ill see you later reshi byes! *leaves*

reshiram:bye! *goes in his house*

keldeo:so its latias isnt it!?

reshiram:HOW DID YOU GET IN HERE!?

keldeo:we're roommates remember?

reshiram:oh yea.....wasent zekrom living with us?

keldeo:he left remember?

reshiram:oh yea...now mew lives with us

mew:you have a crush on latias?

reshiram:NO I DONT!

keldeo:dude when i saw you drooling you were looking at latias

reshiram Embarassed

mew:

keldeo:i knew it!!

reshiram:can you guys PLEASE keep it secret! PLEASE!?

mew:oh relax we wont tell

keldeo:unless $$$$$$$ is involved

mew:*psybeams keldeo*

keldeo:OWWWW ok i get your point!

reshiram:im doomed.....

mew:you wont be doomed ill keep watch on keldeo

keldeo:HEY thats stalking and plus it wont matter once you ask latias out

reshiram:....*faints*

mew:yep hes doomed

keldeo:big time
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:05 pm

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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:08 pm

lolol told you your a boy xD

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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Wed Apr 04, 2012 8:27 am

Pretty good
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:24 pm

more will come later!
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:23 pm

I'll make this blunt.

What the hell is the assumption here?

Keldeo sees Reshiram drooling and the first thing that comes to mind is love?

He couldve been thinking about something to eat in substitute for eating for christ sakes.

Seems cliche..but...w/e...fix it up if you can.
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Wed Apr 04, 2012 6:29 pm

ok clearly you didnt read the whole thing keldeo knew reshi was stearing at latias so there NOW BE PAITIANT FOR THE NEXT PART
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Wed Apr 04, 2012 7:12 pm

PART 2!!!



keldeo:is he waking up?

mew:yep

reshiram:huh? what happened?

mew:after keldeo suggested asking out latias you fainted

keldeo:yup thats it in a nutshell

reshiram:so i have to ask her out.......man im doomed!

mew:wheres your confidence!?

reshiram:well you've never been in love with someone

mew:true....but still!

reshiram:might as well

*later that day*

reshiram:ok reshi you can do this your a dragon shes a dragon you look good she looks good

keldeo:you are seriously over thinking this

reshiram:*sigh* im just worried she'll say no and never like me.......

keldeo:dude it will be fine and if she does i have the sad face comforting ice cream ready

reshiram:ok then *breathes* you can do this reshi *walks outside* umm hey latias!

latias:hhhmmm? of hey reshi! Smile

reshiram:listen i wanted to ask you something.......

latias:yeessss?

reshiram:do you......want to go out with me??

latias: Surprised sure!

reshiram: Very Happy ill pick you up around 7:00 ok?

latias:alright see you tonight! Wink

reshiram:*walks in* .......

keldeo:ssssoooo?

mew:what happened!?

reshiram:SHE SAID YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHHHHHOOOOOOO!!! cheers

keldeo:was that so hard?

reshiram:actualy that was proboly the hardest thing ive ever done!

mew:wow your lucky reshi!

reshiram:if you'll excuse me ima do the happy dance!

keldeo:wow......... roflmao

mew:hey look at the bright side latias said yes!





what will happen next! is reshi gonna get kissed!? or is he and latias in for a extreme suprise!? find out in the next part!
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Thu Apr 05, 2012 5:18 am

lol amazing and funny XD
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Thu Apr 05, 2012 8:13 am

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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:42 am

wait till latios finds out lol

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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:04 am

I think someone else should do the story from Latias's point of view with her own set of friends and such. It could be cool.
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:06 pm

PART 3!


reshiram:ok enough dancing its time for my date!!

*after picking up latias they head for.....*

latias:wait where are we going exactly?

reshiram:see once i had this cottage near this old lake but dont worry the cottage aint the true destination.......you look great by the way

latias: giggle thanks.....so do you

reshiram: thanks....and we're here!!

latias:wow......its beautiful...you had a house here?

reshiram:yea i used it for the summer months but i needed more space

latias:the way the stars reflect off the water is so amazing.....its so beautiful

reshiram:not as beautiful as you latias I love you

latias:i think i'm.....i'm

reshiram:dont say a word.......i know.....

latias:*gasp*

reshiram:*kisses latias*

latias: Shocked

reshiram:sorry if that...i love you.....so much

latias:me too....man i hope latios dosent get mad...

reshiram:actually....i already told him about this.....but dont worry hes cool with it

latias:thats great!.....ill be honest i really didnt see that kiss coming.......

reshiram:*sigh* mew keldeo come on out i knew you were there the whole time.....

mew:IT WAS HIS IDEA!

keldeo:dont lie you wanted to know how it would go

mew:yes but i didnt want it to be like this!

latias: -_- how do you live with them?

reshiram:patience plus its keldeo you have to watch out for...

keldeo:I CAN HEAR YOU!!!

reshiram:i know that.....

latias:you do have interesting friends giggle

reshiram:yea....but with you around its much more tollerable

latias:oh stop your gonna make me blush!

reshiram:

keldeo:hey reshi your drooling agian!

latias:oh stop already besides he looks cute when he drools

mew:they were made for each other

keldeo:ill be honest they totaly were......

reshiram:i love you so much latias

latias:i do to

mew:for the love of arceus someone get me a barf bag!
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:15 pm

haha this is getting better. Maybe you should extend it a bit each time. Add another Point of view maybe. But otherwise this is good.
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:50 pm

you'll be suprised what i have instore
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Fri Apr 06, 2012 5:49 pm

PART 4!!!




mew:ok went to the store and got barf bags

keldeo:thats good....

reshiram:hey latias sence you are moving in.....you dont have a diary do you?

latias:no why?

reshiram:mew gets VERY curious....

mew:im like a purrlion ok! Mad

latias:easy now we all have curiosity inside

keldeo:i never though there would be an actuall voice of reason in this house

mew:get used to it

reshiram:not only that plus said voice has an amazing personality to match

latias: giggle man you are bent on seeing me blush aren't you?

reshiram:maybe so maybe no

mew:*barfs in barf bag*

keldeo:save a lot of those otherwise were gonna have barf everywhere

reshiram:i could keep going if you want......

latias:umm hey reshi can i talk to you privatly for a moment?

reshiram:sure

*reshi and latias go outside*

latias:i wanted to talk to you about this privatly.....you know latios right?

reshiram:of corse why?

latias:well.... hes gone missing

reshiram:what!!! why didn't you tell me earlyer!

latias:i didnt want your friends involved....

reshiram:you do know me and my friends are an exploration team right?

(NOTE TO THE READERS:these events are events i have made up during the timeline of the mystery dungeon series)

latias:wow......i can be so dense.....

reshiram:we all have flaws yet your still beautiful...

latias: Embarassed well for starters you finally made me blush but this ISNT the time for that!

reshiram:right! *walks inside* keldeo grab the treasure bag! we finally have a mission!

mew:saving latios right?

latias:you had the window open didnt you....

mew:sorry but agian im like a purrlion

keldeo:just dont die like one.....

mew:i take your meaning

reshiram:NOT THE TIME FOR THIS!

keldeo and mew:good point!




why is latios missing? why hasent the soul dew been mentioned at all yet!? and was latios captured? some of these questions and more will be answered in paart 5!
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Thu Apr 12, 2012 6:25 pm

PART 5!!!!!



latias:this was where i last saw latios

keldeo: question? WHY WHERE YOU NEAR A MOUNTIAN!!!

latias:this places looks amazing during the day

reshiram:so....search the mountian cave system?

mew:thats usually the point

keldeo:reshiram look at this! its some kind of sword! its got this weird ingraving on it...

reshiram:*takes from keldeo* ok thats it now we MUST search this place!

mew:whats with you all of a sudden?

reshiram:this is my best friends sword.......

latias:whos your best friend?

reshiram:if im correct hes in here and must be hurt...he doesnt lose this easily

latias:well latios might be in there so lets go!!!

*latias and reshiram rush inside*

mew:i sence a flashback

keldeo:your not the only one

*both go in*

reshiram:weird this imprint is in a jewel shape and theres four doors

latias:each door has a shard of the crystal *points to the floor* see here? the lines will fall downword and make a stair case ascending deeper into the mountian

mew:whoa you know a lot

latias:when you play so many legend of zelda games.....

keldeo:focus ladys!

mew&latias:right

reshiram:ok then....ill take far left keldeo take the far right latias take the right mew take left

mew,keldeo & latias:right!

reshiram:ok then....this is an obvious trap....*steps over trip wire* hehehe easy as poffins *steps on pressure plate* well thats clever! *water starts flooding in* oh dump!! *starts flying* must grab crystal!!! *flys to it* gotcha!!! *grabs it and the water starts draining* phew that was close... *walks back

keldeo:ok lets see here.....a picture puzzle? hmmm somethings wrong.....ill find out later *shifts around peices* well it makes the picture of mewtwo now for the tail!......which is missing *Looks to the end of the room* ohhhhh hmmm *walks back to doorway then turns around and starts running* must grab peice.....*spikes come up as hes running* knew that would happen!!! *grabs last peice then turns around* i gotta time this just right...........*jumps over spike wave and runs agian* thanks arceus for my great speed stat!!!! *inserts peice and grabs shard* aww yes!

latias:hmmm *takes out mist spray and sprays it* wow lazers in a mountian......whats next? a underground lab? *moves around lazers and takes shard* i knew reshi didnt know but *wall opens up* what the.....*flames shoot out* holy crap!!! *flys at mach 2* i love my speed hi guys!

keldeo:so we're waiting for mew now?

reshiram:old friend i hope your allright

mew:reshiram? are you still worried about your friend?

reshiram:he never losses his weapon......

keldeo:relax we'll find him

mew:ok back!

reshiram:what took you?

mew:notice i dont have a tail anymore?

latias:i was wondering why you looked so in pain ok everyone insert the gem shards!

*everyone inserts the shards and the stair case opens, everyone walks downstairs and sees....*

reshiram:DEAR ARCEUS ITS YOU!!!!

???:hello.....*cough* old friend.......



who is reshirams best friend? where is latios? why ha the soul dew STILL not been mentioned yet? some of these questions and more coming up soon!!!! in part 6!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:02 am

Lol we know the ? Is arceus lol not bad though
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:42 am

or so you think......
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Sun Aug 26, 2012 1:28 am

Nice storys reshiram and daeth the ? can be anyone, maybe latios even. But a, its probably someone who needs or can at least hold the sword and b. The expression DEAR ARCEUS IT'S YOU. Is equated to DEAR GOD ITS YOU
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Sun Aug 26, 2012 9:08 am

note:i do plan on picking the story back up just give me time.
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:01 pm

PART 6!!!! (srry for the wait)


Reshiram:well this explains the sword but really i never though you would be here samurott!

Keldeo:are we flashbacking now or later?

Samurott:dont let me speak why dont you? allow me to explain *grunt*

Latias: dont move to much you'll take longer to heal

Samurott:it was a year ago about the same time as 2 legendary warriors repaired time. my troop and I we're leading an exploration party thats when i first met Kyurem....and his anger i soon met reshiram after as he explained Kyurems blight as he was tending to my wounds i already knew the fate of my troop as we left the cave reshiram came as part of my proof.

Reshiram:sence everyone would have called him crazy we then worked on restoring Kyurems peaceful side which actually worked well i then left Samurott and went here to Hoenn and keldeo and mew can tell you the rest if you want

Latias:well sence we went through a large portion of backflashing did you see my brother in here?

Samurott: latios? *starts geting up* thats why im here.....actually it was to visit reshiram but then i heard you and your boyfriend there chatting and decided to look into it.

Reshiram:is there no privacy?

Mew:nope now come on we have a mountian to climb!

Samurott:he....she.....its right! we have to move

Latias:take it slow you hard head.

Reshiram:i spent a month with the guy and learned he dosent know what that means

Samurott:indeed i do not! *holds up swords* now lets go forth!


*meanwhile*


Latios:......ugh... my head..

???:wake up weakling its time to talk

Latios:wha?....hey who the heck are you? wheres sis!?

???:shes coming right into my hands along with all her friends

Latios:if this is about the soul dew...

???:i have little time for such a pathetic gem...i want to know where Arceus's beacon is....

Latios:and you think i know?

???:you do but you dont....

Latios:and that means?

???:its within your mind just like you sisters. soon the power of a god shall be mine!!


whats going on? who has Latios captive and does this change everything?
find out.....at some point!!


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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:45 pm

I need to make this quick, I'm dying inside at a dangerous rate just BEING HERE. Where do I start....Grammar. If you are going to attempt to 'write' something, you need to use good grammar. This looks like a chat room quote, or a poem. It's clearly neither.

Next, plot. Oh my mistake, I forgot there is no plot here.

Now on to....everything else. IT'S SO CORNY I'M DYING INSIDE. If you are gonna write a love story PLEASE do it write. Having pokemon for the main characters makes it seem like a book for five year olds, written by a ten year old. And it is absolutely the most embarrassingly cheesy thing I have ever read. It's just redundant. It's like something you would read or watch in the early 1900's. The most simple of plot and dialogue. There's nothing interesting about it, it's so basic. It is in no way unique. The best line in this may possibly be "I am genderless". Sadly, the rest of it does not live up to the standards of that quote. Even if it did, it would still be horrible.



Maybe you should stop writing before you kill someone. GOOD DAY TO YOU SIR.
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Mon Aug 27, 2012 8:18 pm

dear crap i write something for the LOL's and you make it so....litteral.
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PostSubject: Re: reshirams love interest!   Mon Aug 27, 2012 9:05 pm

It was needed.
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