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PostSubject: Short Story   Sat Aug 23, 2008 9:23 pm

Ive gotten a lot of PM Complaints from this story from {Insert username here} about this story...

My delete button has dissapeared so the best thing I can do is edit everything out >_<


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PostSubject: Re: Short Story   Sat Aug 23, 2008 9:52 pm

it's pretty good but somethings are missing out of an sentence maybe you should read over it and fill it in it sounds like true love i know how you fill i got in to something simaliar to this "story" but we broke up i didn't cry but i wanted to we didn't talk for like a week or so then she sen tme an messege saying something i am not willing to say on an pokemon site like she cried every night since we broke up and over things.but like i was saying good story i realy like it
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story   Sun Aug 24, 2008 12:13 pm

thats not short Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story   Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:36 pm

it's a lot shorter than Harry Potter -_-
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story   Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:38 pm

thats true i have 2 harry potter books and i have only read 1 or 2 pages Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story   Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:56 pm

lol i have all the harry potter books man what a long frikin series
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story   Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:49 pm

i have all the harry potter books too and i didnt even finish the 4th book lol
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story   Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:50 pm

btw your short story isnt too bad
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story   Sat Aug 30, 2008 3:06 pm

whats with you and double posting pn? Razz
And I think thats a colorful story.
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