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PostSubject: A good random story (not from my dream)   Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:52 pm

ok this is a continuation of my previous story...
"ROAR!" "OH NO WHAT WAS THAT?" I cried in fear. Slowly, I could hear loud footsteps coming closer and closer. My feet refused to move so I was stuck to the ground. A puke colored smoke floated past me and it smelled like crap. I barfed on a nearby mushroom and saw where the thumping came from. Wishing my Labrador, Corky was with me, my feet finally cooperated and I ran to the nearest tree and hid behind it. Bad luck. A group of evil bananas dropped from the tree and chased me around the dry ground. Their sharp teeth were close to sinking into my body but I managed to slide over to the small pit. I found a some old rope and tried to get myself out of there but the rope broke, so I was stuck in the pit. Now this pit was 5/6 feet deep. Too bad I was very short. Since I had no other idea of getting out of this pit, i dug a small tunnel leading to who-knows-where. The end of the tunnel happened to lead to a beat up door. I entered the door as it creaked. The soles of my shoes had a glowing green substance on it, but I didn't know what is was or where it came from. Forgetting it as I explored the strange place, I spotted a massive footprint the shape of a tree. "This creature that made the footprint must have been the one that was roaring before," I thought with curiosity. I followed the prints that led to an ancient volcano named Abigmountainwithbluelavacomingoutofit. Thinking the lava was water (the lava was an ocean blue color), I jumped in and scorched my butt. Too bad I didn't have time to feel pity for myself because as soon as I saw tons of steam coming out of the volcano, I jumped onto an old giant rock (I'm pretty sure it was a rock) and waited for the steam to lift my rock up so that I can be anywhere but here. Surely enough, the steam did lift my rock up in the air and I landed with a CRASH! in a green land. The same old beeping sound was heard again so of course I pushed the button and was pretty sure I saw some meteors whizz past me. to be continued...


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PostSubject: Re: A good random story (not from my dream)   Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:20 am

nice story!! random though Razz lol, (wonders what happens next)
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PostSubject: Re: A good random story (not from my dream)   Tue Dec 02, 2008 4:35 pm

i will make a series of these random stories making sure they always end with to be continued...oh and by the way i made up the story as i went
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PostSubject: Re: A good random story (not from my dream)   Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:46 pm

Very good story! I love it! I really want you to keep posting and adding more, please. Is Corky your real pets name? If so nice name, if not, very creative!

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PostSubject: Re: A good random story (not from my dream)   Tue Dec 02, 2008 6:31 pm

no it is not. i dont have a labrador or a dog named corky...i copied the name corky from a movie Razz
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PostSubject: Re: A good random story (not from my dream)   Tue Dec 02, 2008 11:59 pm

lol very random indeed but i like random.
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PostSubject: Re: A good random story (not from my dream)   Wed Dec 03, 2008 9:32 pm

you guys i made a continuation of the story...hope you like it
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