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The legend of Jynx
Once apon a time in a village called Chestnut near the forest called Thousond Berry Forrest. In the Village lived a girl named Jynx. Who went to school in the village, who ate dinner with her parents. But Jynx had no friends, and her parents did not lover her that much, she didn't have a job hey you cant blame her she is only 12, she was frownd apon by the puplic of chestnut because one night when she was 6, she was taken by Thousand berrey forrest whitches. When the village went to get her back they gave her back but baring a curse which she whishes she never had, this curse was a curse that gives her bad luck, super bad luck. When she wakes up every morning and has a shower its ice cold water every time, when she has toast for breakfast she always leaves crums everywear which she has to clean up after, when she gets to school her seat breaks. When she went to by her lunch the cashires found that she had fake money and called the police. But today she prmoissed herself will be diffrent, and indeed it was diffrent when she steeped out side it was raining, her mom gave her an umbrella that when she opend it got taken by the wind. She walked to school which wasn't far but oh well. when she got to school she slipped because he shoes were wet, she landed at the popluar girls desk, which mad her scream and yell, the teacher tried to help Jynx up but slipped on the water aswell which made a boy holding his ruler through it backwards in laughter, but the ruler had hit one of the mean boys from the back of the class, and the boy who through the ruler had stopped laughing.
After school Jynx retouned home and was greated by no one, went up stairs for bed because she new her mother would forget about her and would not have dinner. Jynx's day always had something new that was bad happend to her if it wasn't falling into a hole it was getting hit by a stick. Jynx was always upset every day from dawn to dusk but today she had enough, she was going to become the best persons. So the next day she didn't care her shower was cold on the coldest day of the year, she went outside to start her day of being the best person ever. She saw Mrs Pen who was naturally nice taking her bags home from the market. Jynx went up and ask her if she could help and Mrs Pen said "of course". So Jynx took some of the bags and walked with Mrs Pen. A couple minutes later the bag breaks and all the suplise fall onto the ground. Jynx flys down to pick up the cans, vegatable, and other equpement. Jynx was so upset that she failed but she was determined to find away. Mrs Pen had lost most of her jollyness now and was screaming at Jynx, and told her to leave. Then Jynx found Mr Thomas who was sweeping his porch, he was so pleased to hear Jynx wanted to help so went inside while Jynx swept the porch. After sometime of sweeping the wind had blowen in the oppisit direction of Jynx so all the dust went back on the porch, Jynx was so annoyed that she accidentaly hit the broom on a nearby tree. Mr Thomas came out and cried for his broomed and fined Jynx for her vandilism. Jynx went back on the road to look for work and she found Mr smith sanding his table. Jynx asked him if she could help and he said sure, so she took some sand paper and began to sand, sometime latter she took a big piece off the table Mr Smith was a bit upset that he was nearly done and now he had to re-du it all again. Jynx saw the look on Mr Smiths face and she felt sorry, so she went on her way again, but no one would give her work or talk to her, Jynx felt sad and angry so she ran, ran far away, somewhere were where no one find her, somewhere were she is the best. She ran towards Thousand Berry Forrest and ran inside deep,deeper and deeper. Maybe she will find a curse remover, or someone like her where they dont care about anything, where they can live there lives for who they are. Jynx found she couldn't move, her legs felt like they were in cement, she tried to move but it made it worse, she felt as if she was sinking, she was sinking. She was in quick sand, she was stuck crying for help but no one came, the sand was up to her waist, she tried to move this way and that but she went faster, up to her neck now, she started to cry.
No one has seen much of Jynx after that, some say she comes back and haunt the village by givining her curse to the people and people who know of her pain, now you know. Dont worry its only a legend so you dont have to worry or is it a lengend, and this really happend and jynx is going to give you her curse. Be carefull!