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PostSubject: Gone (Poem...)   Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:18 pm

This is a poem for someone, and after reading this, they'll know who they are.

The sheer cold, cuts through my skin.
Growing harder to breathe.
Losing all hope.

Death looks me in the eye.
Fear begins to arise.
This death upon me,
The cause I surely know.

Walking through your hell.

Now the flames engulf my body,
And I'm standing in the fire.
While demons of your presense,
Mock and Conspire.

I sat for days, weeks, and months,
Paining voluntarily, I could easily get out.
However I stayed, and my mind got the better.
But I'm gone, without you, I'm surely better.

The End
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PostSubject: Re: Gone (Poem...)   Tue Jan 13, 2009 8:26 pm

who is it? if its me then i cant tell
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PostSubject: Re: Gone (Poem...)   Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:40 am

Well it definitely isn't me.. I don't think. Its very good Justin.
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PostSubject: Re: Gone (Poem...)   Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:02 am

hey soccer,
thats a awsome peom
who ever it is he might be a emo/ goth, is it me?? JK XD lol
im not emo or goth tho.
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PostSubject: Re: Gone (Poem...)   Wed Jun 24, 2009 3:53 pm

is tht person supposed to be who's supposed to know this or am I stupidly responding to this? lol..nice though..the intro reminds me of a similar poem I did once..plus you already know wht it is, or remember, lol
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PostSubject: Re: Gone (Poem...)   Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:20 pm

did you die?
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